The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compare the different consumption between fish and other kind of meat such as

chicken, beef and lamp weekly per person over a 25 years in Europe

From 1979 to 2004, the fish consumption had always been far less than meat consumption with a

approximately 50 grams per person per week. For the meat consumption, the Chicken

had risen rapidly to become the most eaten in 2014,compared with the figures of gradual

descent of beef and lamp

Although beef consumption is fluctuated between 1979 to 1984. This beef line illustrates the

general downward trend, becoming the second meat consumption in 2004. It drop around 225

grams to 115 grams, showing a cut of 110 grams for these 25 years

besides, The chicken and lamp consumption stood at the figures around 150 grams but It

proved the opposite trend. the chicken consumption stood at 145 grams in 1979 and ascend to

reach 250 grams in 2004,considered the most meat consumption in 2004, showing the increase

of 105 grams. Whereas the lamp consumption gradual reduced over period of 25 years with the

figures from approximately 150 to 70 grams between 1979 and 2004. Showing a reduction of

80grams.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ween fish and other kind of meat such as chicken, beef and lamp weekly per person...
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...en far less than meat consumption with a approximately 50 grams per person per we...
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...r less than meat consumption with a approximately 50 grams per person per week. For the m...
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...k. For the meat consumption, the Chicken had risen rapidly to become the most eat...
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...014,compared with the figures of gradual descent of beef and lamp Although bee...
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...gradual descent of beef and lamp Although beef consumption is fluctuated between ...
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... to 1984. This beef line illustrates the general downward trend, becoming the sec...
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...984. This beef line illustrates the general downward trend, becoming the second mea...
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...the second meat consumption in 2004. It drop around 225 grams to 115 grams, show...
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...tood at the figures around 150 grams but It proved the opposite trend. the ch...
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... at the figures around 150 grams but It proved the opposite trend. the chicken c...
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...he figures around 150 grams but It proved the opposite trend. the chicken consump...
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... but It proved the opposite trend. the chicken consumption stood at 145 grams ...
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...stood at 145 grams in 1979 and ascend to reach 250 grams in 2004,considered the m...
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...onsumption in 2004, showing the increase of 105 grams. Whereas the lamp consumpti...
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...ption in 2004, showing the increase of 105 grams. Whereas the lamp consumption...
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... showing the increase of 105 grams. Whereas the lamp consumption gradual reduced ov...
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...reduced over period of 25 years with the figures from approximately 150 to 70 gra...
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...ed over period of 25 years with the figures from approximately 150 to 70 grams betw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, whereas, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71187667013 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8176169842 43.030603864 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.285714286 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211916648009 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109316452622 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546351062511 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842775055003 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828957604649 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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