Write a letter to a friend who stays in another country that you are planning to visit and say:
-‐ What you plan to see.
-‐ Ask for his/her opinion on where to stay.
-‐ Suggest some activities you can do together
Dear Alex,
it has been a while since we met and I am intending to travel to your country, America. I will spend 4 days in new york, which is the city you are living in. so, I need some suggestions on accommodation as well as food and drinking in this site. it would be nice if you could give me some ideas on where to stay and where to play. I made a schedule already and I would adjust it a bit. so I will to th museum on the first day and enjoy fast food nearby. By the afternoon and the whole next day, I will be on tour around the city. And we can hang out my whole last day in new york. Let's invite our friends and try something as old days like baking or watching movies, having picnic and chatting about our life.
What do you think about this plan? Tell me soon so I could reschedule it.
Can't wait for meeting you.
Love,
Như
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...well as food and drinking in this site. it would be nice if you could give me some...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...le already and I would adjust it a bit. so I will to th museum on the first day an...
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Line 2, column 582, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...hang out my whole last day in new york. Lets invite our friends and try something as...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...Tell me soon so I could reschedule it. Cant wait for meeting you. Love, Như
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97058823529 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05984008517 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0363406005 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.25 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192057910069 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653812969386 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918025016832 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157450556687 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285847204159 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 13.2329268293 33% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 11.4140731707 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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