Task 1:- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain why you like your current job very much
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for considering me for the position of General Manger in your esteemed company. I felt extremely delighted to receive the offer letter as I found the job description quite challenging and interesting, however, I would like to sincerely apologize as I would not be able to accept the offer due to some of my personal reasons.
From the offer letter I happened to know that I have been recruited for the Manesar location which is unfortunately very far off from my current residence, Noida. Manesar is around 50-60km from Noida and it takes around 1.5 to 2 hours to commute from Noida to Manesar. Being a patient of cervical spondylosis, my doctor has strictly advised me to avoid long hours travelling. So, it is extremely difficult for me join the Manesar office.
Moreover, I like my current job a lot because of the work content and no travel time. My current office is very near by and hardly takes 10 minutes to reach. In addition, I have the flexibility to work from home as well. I can manage both my office and home quite efficiently and without much stress.
I hope you would be able to understand my situation and would offer this job position to the next best suited candidate. Thanks for considering me for this position once again and sorry for all the inconvenience caused.
Yours faithfully,
Tejinder
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-07 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-02 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-18 | Ell | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-24 | tejinder15 | 78 | view |
- Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time What problems can this situation create What are the possible solutions Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support 69
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged.Write a letter to the bus company. In your letterinform the bus company of when and to where you travelleddescribe your suitcase and what happened to itexplain why the company sho 73
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letterexplain why you do not like the current programsdescribe wh 78
- Task 1:- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:explain the reason why you decline the offerexpress your gratitudeexplain why you like your current job very 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... travel time. My current office is very near by and hardly takes 10 minutes to reach. I...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78423236515 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74994502137 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9075334956 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6923076923 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119867250194 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042246368937 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418959972417 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069794122451 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308377249234 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.