You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.
Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter
explain why you do not like the current programs
describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead
explain why these programs are better
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/M’am,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the completion of 5 fantastic years of your television channel. I personally love your TV station a lot and am a big fan on all the educational and comedy serials which are currently being broadcasted on your channel.
However, I would also like to bring to your notice that the standard of the evening programs especially the recent debate series on current affairs “Savdhan” and the serial “Crime report” are not up to the mark. I found these serials very preposterous and full of violence. Being the prime time, shows between 6-9 pm should be more educational or family oriented. Such shows would also help in increasing the TRP (Television rating point) of the channel. You can try to accommodate some more comedy serials as well on national television so that maximum people can enjoy.
So, I would request you please give some serious thoughts to my feedback and suggestions and try to replace the above-mentioned shows with the recommended shows.
I will be highly obliged.
Yours sincerely,
Tejinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed shows. I will be highly obliged. Yours sincerely, Tejinder
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14063373333 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1036005486 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192384125432 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635645942921 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520244439346 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965142975243 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773430072675 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.