You feel the evening programs on a local television station are uninteresting.
Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter
explain why you do not like the current programs
describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead
explain why these programs are better
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/M’am,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the completion of 5 fantastic years of your television channel. I personally love your TV station a lot and am a big fan on all the educational and comedy serials which are currently being broadcasted on your channel.
However, I would also like to bring to your notice that the standard of the evening programs especially the recent debate series on current affairs “Savdhan” and the serial “Crime report” are not up to the mark. I found these serials preposterous and full of violence. Being the prime time, shows between 6-9 pm should be more entertaining, educational and family oriented. Such shows would also help in increasing the TRP (Television rating point) of the channel. For example, you can try to accommodate some more comedy serials on national television so that maximum people would be able to enjoy them totally.
So, I would request you please take my feedback positively. Also please try to give some serious thoughts to my suggestions and replace the above-mentioned evening shows with the recommended shows.
I will be highly obliged.
Yours sincerely,
Tejinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...you please take my feedback positively. Also please try to give some serious thought...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed shows. I will be highly obliged. Yours sincerely, Tejinder
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26842105263 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16657141325 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7378570945 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211096120945 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662628220811 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524100642293 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102340554473 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700794583431 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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