It is an obvious truth that in the developed countries people are getting aging that can lead to a variety of issues. This essay mention the different problems due to aging and suggest some solutions in order to tackle this concerns.
As a matter of fact, society will be faced with numerous problems associated with aging. The first and foremost is about lack of or fewer youth people in comparison to elderly which means having less happy or beneficial society. The people of these kind of countries are prone to being depressed maybe because of being alone that can have a catastrophic impact on society. In addition, the more aging the society get, the more facilities related to elderly is needed that can cost a huge amount of money for people and society as well. For example, elderly people may become disabled who need some especial facilities that government must consider them.
As every problem has it's solution, the most important step that can be taken in order to address this problem is providing a cheerful atmosphere for elderly. Actually, elderly can benefit from some special parties or taking apart in youngsters sessions in order to share their experience with young people. In his way not only older people can take advantages but younger people can use from their experience which can have a significant role on their future life. The other thing that must be considered is relate to providing different provision which may come useful for old people. As an example, Constructing suitable public transports that are useful for palsied, who utilize wheelchairs, can be named as an remarkable action.
In conclusion, increasing the life expectancy is associated with numerous problems such as feeling loneliness and suffering from depression. Furthermore, it is sometimes extremely so costly that can not only impact on their families but society.
In order to deal with these problems government should take some steps like equipping public places with facilities and try to support them psychologically, before everything get worse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...lead to a variety of issues. This essay mention the different problems due to aging and...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...py or beneficial society. The people of these kind of countries are prone to being depress...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
... other thing that must be considered is relate to providing different provision which ...
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Line 5, column 712, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ho utilize wheelchairs, can be named as an remarkable action. In conclusion, i...
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Line 8, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...t society. In order to deal with these problems government should take some steps like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16369047619 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69530323148 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5271731396 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197734511142 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717070692268 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508827343668 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111684000947 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463317894463 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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