Some children have problems at home and difficulties at school. Why do you think this happens? How can parents help them?
Children are the most vulnerable members of each society. Unfortunately, some of these children have some problem in their home and their school. In my point of view, it is our responsibility as their parents to find the source of these kinds of problem and meanwhile try to solve them.
In my opinion, root problems that children have in their most of the time are their parents. It is clearly, children for growing up need a warm house, parents that give them love and take care of them. We cannot find a prefect family, every family has some issue. However, some parents fight in front of their children, or careless to their children. They do not pay attention to their children needy. So, we can see most of the time these children have some difficulty to speak or they have problem to make a friend and so on.
In addition, some children have some health issue. For example their eyes are poor or they cannot hear very carefully. These kings of health problems cause's children have not a good performance in their school. In some cases, their parents and their teachers are not aware of these problems. Furthermore, some children have unusual look like, for example they are fat, or short or have a big ears and so on. All of these thing cause children have some trouble in school because of their classmates. Their classmates make some joke about them and laugh and never begin friend with them.
As their parents, we should learn we must prepare a good situation for them. We should begin friend with them. Talk to them and find their problems. We should arrange full checkup at least every year, so we can find about their health problems.
To sum up, I believe to eliminate problems that children have, all parents, children, teachers should co-operate each other. Adult should learn youngest instead of make joke, help to each other. We should teach them begin friendly and show our kindness is valuable more than they think.
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. 43
- Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day and is looking for people to talk about their country. Write a letter and say- What topics would you like them to cover?- Why would it be interesting for students?- Ask questions 70
- You have just returned from a work trip abroad with a colleague Write a thank you letter to your colleague and say How you feel to be back how helpful he she was invite him her to visit you at home 60
- Write a letter to a friend who has visited you a few days ago and has left his mobile at your place Please mention The visit he paid you and how you felt about it How you found his her cell phone at your place Suggest ways of sending it back to him her 54
- Nowadays young people are less polite and respectful to others Who do you think can influence them more family or society to change their attitude Give examples from your own experience 76
These kings of health problems cause's children have not a good performance in their school.
These kings of health problems cause children not to have a good performance in their schools.
Sentence: We cannot find a prefect family, every family has some issue.
Error: prefect Suggestion: perfect
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.703 7.5
Still have grammatical issues. Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 293 350
No. of Characters: 1318 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.137 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.498 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.212 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.703 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.524 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.211 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5