Some children have problems at home and difficulties at school. Why do you think this happens? How can parents help them?
Children are the most vulnerable members of each society. Unfortunately, some of these children have some problem in their home and their school. In my point of view, it is our responsibility as their parents to find the source of these kinds of problem and meanwhile try to solve them.
In my opinion, root problems that children have in their most of the time are their parents. It is clearly, children for growing up need a warm house, parents that give them love and take care of them. We cannot find a prefect family, every family has some issue. However, some parents fight in front of their children, or careless to their children. They do not pay attention to their children needy. So, we can see most of the time these children have some difficulty to speak or they have problem to make a friend and so on.
In addition, some children have some health issue. For example their eyes are poor or they cannot hear very carefully. These kings of health problems cause's children have not a good performance in their school. In some cases, their parents and their teachers are not aware of these problems. Furthermore, some children have unusual look like, for example they are fat, or short or have a big ears and so on. All of these thing cause children have some trouble in school because of their classmates. Their classmates make some joke about them and laugh and never begin friend with them.
As their parents, we should learn we must prepare a good situation for them. We should begin friend with them. Talk to them and find their problems. We should arrange full checkup at least every year, so we can find about their health problems.
To sum up, I believe to eliminate problems that children have, all parents, children, teachers should co-operate each other. Adult should learn youngest instead of make joke, help to each other. We should teach them begin friendly and show our kindness is valuable more than they think.
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These kings of health problems cause's children have not a good performance in their school.
These kings of health problems cause children not to have a good performance in their schools.
Sentence: We cannot find a prefect family, every family has some issue.
Error: prefect Suggestion: perfect
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Sentence Length SD: 5.703 7.5
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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