You are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. write a letter to complain about the same to city council. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe the situation
say what you want the officer to do for you.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well , I am a resident of Steel Town. It is to inform you, that recently repair and maintenance work was conducted on road near my house. It seems like quality of material that has been used isn't up-to the quality standards.
Let me explain you further, as this development work was completed just two weeks ago, but condition of road suggests, like it was completed a year ago. Furthermore, it is to bring in your notice the quality of material that has been used. As per few contractors believe the quality standard of material has been compromised. Moreover, it is important to mentioned at this stage about the volume of heavy traffic that used this road. So, I believe it is vital that you should visit this road and conduct an enquiry in this regard for low quality material that has been used.
Therefore, it is requested to kindly take some sort of action before it gets too late and condition of road becomes nuisance again for local population. Hopefully, you will take measures to resolve this issue.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Regards
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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- You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope this letter finds you well , I am...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., I hope this letter finds you well , I am a resident of Steel Town. It is to...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... quality of material that has been used isnt up-to the quality standards. Let m...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... used isnt up-to the quality standards. Let me explain you further, as this deve...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...quality of material that has been used. As per few contractors believe the quality...
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Line 5, column 576, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow quality material that has been used. Therefore, it is requested to kindly tak...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Looking forward to hearing from you, Regards Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to hearing from you, Regards Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48386791821 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5041647516 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212572641257 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821627799744 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032692466082 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135697765075 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297777298901 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.