currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ?
Now a days, it is belived that in this era easily find the place that provide alternative of medicine, but sometime these method are ineffective and at the worst they may be dangerous even also cause of death. In this essay, I completelly agree wiht this statement that it gives more disadvantage rather than the advantage for some reasons.
In the one hand, the main benefit of this problem alternative medicine ineffective in treating the deases and maybe couse of death. Because traditional medicine does not promise cure for any deases. Firstly, the alternative medicine that exist in society today it is largely base on suggestion and the experience of the patient. A new therapy or drug can be effectively used and safety when it has been tested repeatedly and through a variety of scientific proof processes to indicate security, effectiveness, and quality. Secondly, some research from expert found that the lack of medical envidence can be interpreted as the use of alternative treatment no to be recomended. Each of the traditional method of the treatment can cause different reaction between one person and another. I believed that it is better to prefer consultation with doctor first and following the instruction to get continuing treatment in hospital or other recommended place that has license.
On the other hand, many people prefer to use alternative treatment. Because alternative method treatment easily find and quite cheap for middle class society until low. Taken some region as an example, we can easily find place that provide alternative treatment such us reflection massage, becam and many more. It is proven that people with low budget prefer to use alternative traetment due to cheap and affordable. In conclusion I hope before use this method every people should to consultation with the doctor first.
To sum up, from where I stand it is already clear it gives more dimerit rather than the merit. I believed that alternative method of treatment is not recommended, sometime also dangerous to use. Choose the method treatment that have licensed and guarantee.
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- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement? 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, it is belived that in this era easily ...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, it is belived that in this era easily ...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
...e alternative of medicine, but sometime these method are ineffective and at the worst they m...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ted as the use of alternative treatment no to be recomended. Each of the tradition...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14076246334 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84126844762 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3379058279 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229861948365 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072607342833 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501491077589 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143934656966 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582007226022 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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