currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement?
in this era, people thought that medicine is an essential kind in mos society, especially for the part of care healthy. who choose alternative forms of medicine. but, many people trusted it can be worst for some people. In this narration I totally disagree with these issue for some reasons and fact.
In the one hand, the drugs consumers should know about different kind of natural drugs. Such as spices and healthy methods. Because, natural drugs can cured many cases of sick people by the experts. Take China for an example, who still used natural antibiotic to detoxify poisons with acupuncture, message and so on. However, many traditional drugs used in the whole world and give many advantages for many persons.
In the second hand, synthetic drug who used in many hospital give several problems by its dose and make people addicted. Because, it can be seen that it has so many ingredients from chemical things. For an next example, in United States of America many people has addicted to consume antibiotic from chemical pharmacy who has made a large industries system. Basically, by its fact many victims from chemical drugs which is make many Americans dependency to pills and so on.
Finally, although the majority of citizen in the world choose to eat chemical drugs, so many people can’t denied that natural alternative drug more save than chemical pharmacy industry product. So, public should take good care of their bodies and give a better choice to use natural friendly medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
in this era, people thought that medicine ...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...specially for the part of care healthy. who choose alternative forms of medicine. b...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...specially for the part of care healthy. who choose alternative forms of medicine. b...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...o choose alternative forms of medicine. but, many people trusted it can be worst fo...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gs. Such as spices and healthy methods. Because, natural drugs can cured many cases of ...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y ingredients from chemical things. For an next example, in United States of Ameri...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
... chemical pharmacy who has made a large industries system. Basically, by its fact many vic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, so, still, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01593625498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45415739625 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565737051793 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.316448164 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749210930849 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333096380838 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334722482922 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561128810395 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490985051553 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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