the line graph gives information on cinema attendance in the UK
the line graph compare how many people went to the movie theater in the UK tend to four aged groups from 1990 to 2010
it is clean that the attendance in cinema increased over the period shown. especially, the younger people active in movie going than the older people. exceptionally, for a drop slightly from 1995 to 2000.
by the year 1990, the highest viewer was about 39 percent in 14 to 24 aged and the lowest was 15 percent in 44 to 54 aged. following five years between 1995 and 2000, there was a peaked the bottom of all figure's aged.
over a five-year period from 2005 from 2010, the group of 14 to 24 aged watched film in cinema rose at 51 percent by the most important, beside the percentage of 24 to 34 aged also went up. therefore, both groups 34 to 44 aged and 44 to 54 aged had remained stable trend in about 30 percent.
- the line graph gives information on cinema attendance in the UK 56
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 77
- the line graph gives information on cinema attendance in the UK 56
- the given graph show the consumption of fast food in the UK ( per week) from 1970 to 1990 56
- using modern connect are useful now aday. agree and disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cinema increased over the period shown. especially, the younger people active in movie go...
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...od shown. especially, the younger people active in movie going than the older peo...
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...e in movie going than the older people. exceptionally, for a drop slightly from 1995 to 2000....
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...lowest was 15 percent in 44 to 54 aged. following five years between 1995 and 2000, there...
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...peaked the bottom of all figures aged. over a five-year period from 2005 from 2010,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24375 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25026908113 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0505866548 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946984432327 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414358472857 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884746845467 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690243757525 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063629860046 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.