use of social media
use of social media
in society more and more modern, more and more development strongly. especially, high technological industry superior to others. An investigation indicated that people use many kind of social media such as television, computer, phone,... particularly, two of them are computer and phone make an advantage ever day. everyone gets phone on facebook, twitter, instagram take amount of time in day. also, computer was used each day for working, playing, relaxing,... everything on its. however, we have to mention to benefits we get it: research online on internet everday help you update newest information and rely on its we can get access to each place on the world. moreover,largest benefit in using of social media reduce distance between people to people.
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| 2018-12-26 | sophia1 | 22 | view |
| 2018-09-26 | Akashdulana | 22 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Use
use of social media in society more and mo...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...rn, more and more development strongly. especially, high technological industry superior t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...investigation indicated that people use many kind of social media such as television, com...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...edia such as television, computer, phone,... particularly, two of them are compute...
^^
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...r and phone make an advantage ever day. everyone gets phone on facebook, twitter, instag...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
..., instagram take amount of time in day. also, computer was used each day for working...
^^^^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... each day for working, playing, relaxing,... everything on its. however, we have t...
^^
Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...laying, relaxing,... everything on its. however, we have to mention to benefits we get ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'update the newest'.
Suggestion: update the newest
...rch online on internet everday help you update newest information and rely on its we can get ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 667, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... get access to each place on the world. moreover,largest benefit in using of social medi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 675, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , largest
...ess to each place on the world. moreover,largest benefit in using of social media reduce...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 675, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...ess to each place on the world. moreover,largest benefit in using of social media reduce...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98744337152 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725806451613 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8837308938 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8888888889 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33079566083 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125769858652 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159990413091 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23830189103 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.