Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be national or global, and either a single moment or an event which took place over a period of time. Most importantly, the essay must express your own ideas in your own words, and not be copied directly from any source such as the Internet.
in the past time, people contacted directly by facing together or indirectly by sending letters. the communication through this way that restrict expressing information ability of people. thus, in recently years, the high technology has been developing strongly and straightly connection between people each other. easily seeing the development like at now must mention the basis of invention such as cell phone, mobile and smart phone.
after inventing out phone , human beings can make acquaintances and a conversation easily. this invention could help more quickly and conveniently than usual or directly like common ways. since phone appear in people's life, every thing is coming busier, people don't face with each other who still could talk to. the most useful benefit can be gained that finished completely own self's goals without meeting in person. people could utilize greatest of phone features like calling, sending message that are sore of value of phone. as smart phone nowadays could know more well with other values such as selfi camara, face time calls and GPRS apps in software of smarts.
however, smart phone not only has benefits above but also some hazards which couldn't be uncontrollable. especially, phone could affect to human's health. if you make an advantages a lot, you will be get into badly your health.
To conclude, the invention could be affected the more people use the more bad influence to society and our own self
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1829787234 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52125409395 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697872340426 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4171945668 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745608749655 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292687667346 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322736627504 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514482406706 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199439190503 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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