Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be national or global, and either a single moment or an event which took place over a period of time. Most importantly, the essay must express your own ideas in your own words, and not be copied directly from any source such as the Internet.
TThe electricity invention was a breakthrough which transformed the way in which billions of people across the world work, learn and communicate. It was the first and perhaps the greatest of humanity’s step towards a life-enhancing technology.
First, electricity is an inexpensive and friendly-environment source of energy. The use of fuels like coal, oil and petroleum releases a lot of gases in the atmosphere. These are quite harmful both to the environment and the living beings. Using electricity as a source of energy does not release any kind of greenhouse gases in the environment. Moreover, when compared to other fuels like ethanol and methanol, electricity is more cost effective and affordable.
Second, electricity generates tremendous benefits for economics. Electricity is essential for agriculture. It has contributed to produce labour-saving appliances include countless types of farm implements. Agriculture even uses automatic irrigation systems, computers with satellite imagery and satellite navigation (GPS guidance) to increase yields. As farmland acreage narrows, underground farm models open up a new era in agriculture. As far as I know, a subterranean farm called Growing Underground in London have used special low-energy LED bulbs in multiple intensities. In the light of artificial lights and special planting technology, vegetables have grown extremely well and are becoming a major source of supply for restaurants in the city. This type of vegetable model can cope with population pressure, widen global urbanization, and also helps create jobs, reduces transportation costs and reduces pollution. Moreover, the energy of electricity is known as the driving force of an extensive range of industries. It plays a crucial role in operating most devices. According to a survey, previously 30,000 spindles needed 450 employees and each person controlled a machine, but now only 18 employees and a person can control 3 machines, the remaining are automated. Sweated labour is superseded by machine. The factory has been fully mechanized enabling it to produce more efficiently. Electricity has given birth to the assembly line, which means everything is produced by machines precisely and constantly. Machines can work 24/24 hours without recharging, even in dark conditions without light, while still controlling speed and quality. Therefore, people can easily overcome the difficulty of dealing with a heavy workload with machines which have been set up. In fact, electricity's advent helped to accelerate in industrial productivity on scales never seen before.
Third, electricity has had far-reaching effects on transport. Only with the advent of electricity, people can install speed cameras and the traffic light which are great contributions to the safety of people on the street and alleviates traffic problems. Moreover, electricity is an important appearance for electric vehicles invention. Trains don't need to carry their own fuel and fuel is supplied through the overhead cables. According to railway-technology.com, electric trains are more environmentally friendly too, emitting between 20% - 30% less carbon monoxide than their diesel counterparts. Figures published by the Telegraph in 2009 say that electric trains cost 20p less than diesel trains, per mile, to maintain. For the passengers, there are also benefits, with Network Rail saying the journeys in electric trains will be 'faster and quieter journeys with more seats on trains and improved reliability on some of the busiest routes'. Likewise, the electric car market is growing rapidly in the world. With diesel and petrol coming under pressure - not just from demand, but also from governments looking to reduce harmful emissions - electric cars are increasingly looking to the future of motoring. Electricity has brought smokeless journeys transport to help protect the environment.
Fourth, electricity has blown a new wind for media and entertainment. All programs are dependent on electricity. Television allows people to update information about economic, political and weather that serve the needs of life. More significantly, electricity creates a much more attractive world where we can experience 3d films, comedy. In contrast to print media, the electronic media are growing in popularity, especially among the youth. Electricity enables people to join social networking sites, such as Facebook, Instagram or chat rooms, or to maintain contact through Skype to build relationships.
Last but not least, the electricity has made outstanding contributions to medicine. Cancer, leprosy and many other fatal diseases are cured by a painless electrical contact. X-rays and electrocution are used in diagnosis and emergency. Electricity has proven effective for modern treatment of many diseases by surgery. It's terrible that patients are undergoing surgical operations without electricity.
Electricity is a boon of science to modern society. Our life will slip back to primitive age without electricity. Electricity is one of the core inventions which has driven the growth. However, the sources of energy for producing electricity are not endless. As a result, everyone should make an attempt to reduce the consumption of electricity as by using it more reasonably and effectively.
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, in contrast, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 10.4138276553 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 105.0 41.998997996 250% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4517.0 1615.20841683 280% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 796.0 315.596192385 252% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67462311558 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.31163552584 4.20363070211 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2229634077 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 460.0 176.041082164 261% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 1414.8 506.74238477 279% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 50.0 16.0721442886 311% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4519335912 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.34 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.92 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 8.67935871743 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 3.4128256513 527% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0345127563848 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00785481894904 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.013150432343 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192318650279 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0080110428157 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 253.0 78.4519038076 322% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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