Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be national or global, and either a single moment or an event which took place over a period of time
The electricity invention was a breakthrough which transformed the way in which billions of people across the world work, learn and communicate. It was the first and perhaps the greatest of humanity’s step towards a life-enhancing technology.
First, electricity is an inexpensive, friendly environment. The use of fuels like coal, oil and petroleum releases a lot of gases in the atmosphere. These are quite harmful both to the environment and the living beings. Using electricity as a source of energy does not release any kind of greenhouse gases in the environment. Moreover, when compared to other fuels like ethanol and methanol, electricity is more cost effective and affordable.
Second, electricity generates tremendous benefits for economics and social.
The energy of electricity is known as the driving force of an extensive range of industries. It plays a crucial role in operating most devices. Sweated labour is superseded by machine. The factory has been fully mechanized enabling it to produce more efficiently. Electricity has given birth to the assembly line, which means everything is produced by machines precisely and constantly. Machines can work 24/24 hours without recharging, even in "dark" conditions without light, while still controlling speed and quality. Therefore, people can easily overcome the difficulty of dealing with a heavy workload with machines which have been set up. You can not deny the fact that electricity's advent helped to accelerate in industrial productivity on scales never seen before and brought about a greater volume and variety of factory-produced goods and raised the standard of living for many people. Had it not been for the firm foundation of electricity, the industry could have never been achieved.
Electricity is essential for daily transportation. Only with the advent of electricity people can install speed cameras and create the traffic light which is a great contribution to the safety of people on the street and alleviates traffic problem. Moreover, electricity is an important appearance for electric vehicles’s invention. Trains don't need to carry their own fuel and fuel is supplied through the overhead cables. Thus, this means the electric trains are lighter than diesel trains. According to railway-technology.com, electric trains are more environmentally friendly too, emitting between 20% - 30% less carbon monoxide than their diesel counterparts. You can even calculate the amount of carbon you'll be saving with one train company here. Figures published by the Telegraph in 2009 say that electric trains cost 20p less than diesel trains, per mile, to maintain. For the passengers, there are also benefits, with Network Rail saying the journeys in electric trains will be 'faster and quieter journeys with more seats on trains and improved reliability on some of the busiest routes'. Likewise, the electric car market is growing rapidly in the world. With diesel and petrol coming under pressure - not just from demand, but also from governments looking to reduce harmful emissions - electric cars are increasingly looking to the future of motoring. Electricity has brought a smoke-free journey transport to help protect the environment.
Electricity has blown a new wind for media and entertainment. All programs are dependent on electricity. Television allows people to update information around the world and grasp the economic, political and weather conditions that serve the needs of life. More significantly, electricity creates a much more attractive world where we can experience 3d films, comedy. In contrast to print media, the electronic media are growing in popularity, especially among the youth. Electricity enables people to join social networking sites, such as Facebook, Instagram or chat rooms, or to maintain contact through Skype to build strong relationships.
The electricity has made outstanding contributions to medical science. Cancer, leprosy, and many other fatal diseases are cured by a painless electrical contact. X-rays and electrocution are used in diagnosis and emergency. Electricity has proven effective for modern treatment of many diseases in surgery. Hundreds of patients are undergoing surgical operations which are impossible without electricity.
Electricity is a boon of science to modern society. Our life will slip back to primitive age without electricity. Electricity is one of the core inventions which has driven the growth.
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
- Choose a significant historical event in the last 100 years and explain why, in your opinion, it was important. The event can be the development of an idea, discovery or invention, a moment that expressed a change in society, or natural event. It may be n 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 41.998997996 214% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3803.0 1615.20841683 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 680.0 315.596192385 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59264705882 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10654576214 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17057092573 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 384.0 176.041082164 218% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1181.7 506.74238477 233% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 16.0721442886 268% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5459532066 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4418604651 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8139534884 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16279069767 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 8.67935871743 265% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 3.4128256513 498% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.036508594876 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00914956970591 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0163188120682 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0162215452743 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127558303228 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 194.0 78.4519038076 247% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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