Internet has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is vitally important to start educating people the importance of internet and how they should follow them in order for the best result to follow suits as they are the pillars and the power will guide our nation toward progress. When comes to the statement, some people mag agree with this idea and give us sound reasons to support their beliefs. On the others hand, people might disagree with the idea and have different opinions. Also those opponent probably will provide us with puissant evidences to support their thought. I believe Internet will provides people with a lot of valuable information, the reasons go as follow.
To begin with, Internet has an incontrovertible efficient on everyone's daily lives. Due to the revolutionary impact on the new technology that has a spectacular breakthrough many spheres in our communities,such as Ipad and smartphones, that sometimes reflect positively to education. For example, I was accustomed to walk 15 minutes in order to check happening events on school bulletin board, after the school administration built a phone application, students are able to check school events within few clicks on phone screen, at the same time, the discussion room in the application allow student to discussed homework and share information. This results show internet create a atmosphere that is conducive acquiring knowledge.
Secondly, internet also provide connection even thought your friends are in a foreign country. Recently, I used the Instagram's story function to keep track my friends situation. Some of my friends are studying in foreign university, the time equation cause us cannot have phone call all the time but using the Instagram story function I can share my daily events to all my friends and I also can check on theirs when I am free, this action make me and my friends stay in a close relationship despite we are not often connect.
Thirdly, we allowed to follow news in an immediate time. Nowadays, we are allowed to purchase new devises this will lead to a positive atmosphere because we can get our information immediately. For instance, We used to wait for daily newspaper to check with international and local events, as the matter of fact, internet allowed us to receive information immediately. Phone will renew and notify you when a news come out, you do not have to keep track on it. Moreover, many studied which have been done by universities in United States constantly stated that, internet provides people with a lot of valuable information and make our live become more efficient, and more studies was studying about this subject. Finally, scholar confirm with this idea and this experiments taught me that Internet is beneficial to our lives.
For all have been discussed may finally draw a conclusion that says, Internet will provide us immediate and valuable information. This action will improve our social lives.People who hold different opinion have right to believe. But my opinion and others people are overwhelming to much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 508, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...h the idea and have different opinions. Also those opponent probably will provide us...
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Line 1, column 627, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
... their thought. I believe Internet will provides people with a lot of valuable informati...
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Line 1, column 694, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...of valuable information, the reasons go as follow. To begin with, Internet has an inco...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , such
...kthrough many spheres in our communities,such as Ipad and smartphones, that sometimes...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to walking'.
Suggestion: accustomed to walking
...tively to education. For example, I was accustomed to walk 15 minutes in order to check happening ...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion. This results show internet create a atmosphere that is conducive acquiring ...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...t often connect. Thirdly, we allowed to follow news in an immediate time. Nowadays, we...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...is action will improve our social lives.People who hold different opinion have right t...
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Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...nion and others people are overwhelming to much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2596.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11023622047 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8557341106 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511811023622 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 819.9 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.2400596468 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264609576247 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861769133779 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077806267235 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141553261915 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874552965379 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.