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Friendship has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. That is no doubt that when problem comes to our lives, most of the people will tend to looking their long period friends. When comes to this statement, some people may agree with this idea and give us sounds reasons for their belief. On the other hand, some people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also those opponents probably will provide puissant evidences to support their thought.I am agree with the statement and believe old friends can make us more joyful, the reasons go as follow.
To begin with, the sense of trust has an incontrovertible affect on everyone's feeling, people will tend to looking for that feeling when they have trouble, instead of family, long period friends are the people provide the security toward us. Take myself as an example, I transferred my high school when I was fifteen, when I having problem in a new environment, the first come to my mind is to share it to my old friends because they know my personalities and will provide me a suitable answer for me, in contrary, I feel shy toward my new friends, I am afraid to share my secret to them because I feel insecure to my new friends.
Secondly, compare to a new friend, the relationship with old friend is more memorable and we willing to spend time to continue our memories. By understanding, we are able to tolerate with old friends bad habits. For instance, I have a friend since elementary school and she do not like to clean her rubbish, nonetheless I would willing to help her clean her rubbish without any complaint which I would not do for a new friend that I am not familiar. Moreover, many studied which have been done by many universities in United States constantly stated that long period friends provide us happiness and the sense of trust this feeling lead us willing to continue the relationship, and more studied was studying this subject. Finally scholar prove the examination and make me believe long time friendship are more trust-able.
For all have been discussed may finally draw a conclusion that long time friendship is more important that a new friend. This examination can improve our social life. People who hold opposite opinions have right to believe. But my opinion and others people are overwhelmingly to much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... this idea and have different opinions. Also those opponents probably will provide p...
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Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...sant evidences to support their thought.I am agree with the statement and believe...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...evidences to support their thought.I am agree with the statement and believe old frie...
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...can make us more joyful, the reasons go as follow. To begin with, the sense of trust...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... sense of trust has an incontrovertible affect on everyones feeling, people will tend to ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...my high school when I was fifteen, when I having problem in a new environment, th...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... friend since elementary school and she do not like to clean her rubbish, nonethel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...more studied was studying this subject. Finally scholar prove the examination and make ...
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Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...on and others people are overwhelmingly to much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, no doubt, i am afraid, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97721386153 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503685503686 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6397401806 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292413198586 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101820052709 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631244468986 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143758186484 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899352769527 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.