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The Debate of Workplace Surveillance

In fabric exhibition room, there are linens, mixed yarns, silk, pure wool, cotton were ordered by many business person.

Now, The Cheongsam is liked by not only Chinese women but also foreigner because it expose the beauty of the women’s body.


Wide bell bottom pants and large paint which used to be favorited, now it is become to legging.
I think mixed yarns which use for sew paints are better because you don’t need to iron your paint after washing
Normal, cheongsam there are 2 split lines each tails so too easy to do activities and easy to shows slim legs of women.
Everyone believe that collar is play an important role of shirt. so that, we have to consider customer’s face when we design their shirt
if you are fat, you shouldn’t choose pleated skirts, Flared skirt and large dress. Color of skirt shouldn’t be pale and shirt shouldn’t have horizontal stripes because it make you fatter
Each woman who has own opinion about clothes which they should wear. However, if you want to more beautiful, you should know basic theories of clothes

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... were ordered by many business person. ^^^
Line 4, column 491, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exposes'?
Suggestion: exposes
...size='4'>foreigner because it expose the beauty of the women's body.
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... to shows slim legs of women. Everyone believe that collar is play an important role o...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...lar is play an important role of shirt. so that, we have to consider customer&apos...
^^
Line 11, column 188, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...os;t have horizontal stripes because it make you fatter Each woman who has own opi...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.91452991453 5.12529762239 154% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.96512872606 2.80592935109 284% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 378.942675111 49.4020404114 767% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.571428571 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.0946893788 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.14 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 29.19 12.4159519038 235% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 45.0 9.78957915832 460% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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