University students always focus on one specific subject, but some people think that universities should encourage their students to study a wide range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Seeing scenario as per my experience some students have their different skills and abilities so they select subject related to intereste for fulfill their requirements. Somewhere college management give option to the students to choose subject by adding in the field study. this essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage to what is profitable for future for students .
On the one hand, i think some additional subject improve knowledge about study. For example practical study can provide exordinary skill. college management provide computer basic knowledge for student . computer skill is necessary for everyone. As we know that graduation and course have common subject to perform. universities have to declare some additional subject as a option so on student can choose for their running semester. For example. some engineering students learn power plant so by that they get job in future from this subject.
On the other hand, already we know today's education is a one type of burdon for present student. And some extra study material by subject create pressure on students mind. it can reduce focus to the student learning style. some average students might be fail by this adding subject because of the burdon of extra subject.
To put it in a nutshell, i pen down saying that, universities have remember that some students are week and some are topper so they have to choose normal subject which is not hard and not easy. they need to select extraordinary subject which can help in future.
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- University students always focus on one specific subject, but some people think that universities should encourage their students to study a wide range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to subject
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...at is profitable for future for students . On the one hand, i think some addit...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ure for students . On the one hand, i think some additional subject improve k...
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Suggestion: College
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...ide computer basic knowledge for student . computer skill is necessary for everyon...
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Suggestion: Computer
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...raduation and course have common subject to perform. universities have to declare...
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Suggestion: Some
...or their running semester. For example. some engineering students learn power plant ...
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Suggestion: to power
...xample. some engineering students learn power plant so by that they get job in future...
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... plant so by that they get job in future from this subject. On the other han...
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...y get job in future from this subject. On the other hand, already we know today...
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...bject create pressure on students mind. it can reduce focus to the student learnin...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to style'
Suggestion: to style
...an reduce focus to the student learning style. some average students might be fail b...
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...nt learning style. some average students might be fail by this adding subject bec...
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...because of the burdon of extra subject. To put it in a nutshell, i pen down sayi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remembered'.
Suggestion: remembered
...pen down saying that, universities have remember that some students are week and some ar...
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Suggestion: They
...subject which is not hard and not easy. they need to select extraordinary subject wh...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ct extraordinary subject which can help in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13360323887 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61484336974 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7049100521 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.25 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358615600933 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125267932907 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841158966514 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238530985736 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415851404908 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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