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The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. How far do you agree?
The investments on space discoveries had good effects for humankinds. However, people could spend this money to other sectors and to underprivileged ones.
On the one hand, the present generation lives in a century of innovations, this means that people became more developed and knowledgeable, if they are able to discover new things. Thus, individuals want to be aware of what are they surrounded with, in other words, they want to know what is the space, and what type of matter is it. In order to develop science and make new technologies, people had to dicover space, other galaxies. Fo...
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Sentence: In order to develop science and make new technologies, people had to dicover space, other galaxies.
Error: dicover Suggestion: discover
Sentence: Moreover, if money would not have invested, a communtity would not know about coming meteorits and no one could prevent big losses, such as deaths, for example.
Error: communtity Suggestion: community
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Sentence: On the other hand, there are many pright people all over the world.
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Sentence: Every few seconds someone is dying from disease, because this person could not afford bying drugs himself.
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Sentence: In addition to this , there is also a huge amount of peole, living in rural areas, who have no water sypply and heat systems and so on.There is just an uncountable amount of homeless people, and instead of giving money to scientists for discoveries, that some ordinary people do not need at all, the government of a certain countries, could save thousands of lives.
Error: sypply Suggestion: supply
Error: peole Suggestion: people
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