The number of elderly people in the world is increasing What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend

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The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

No sensible person can deny, that the quantity of elderly has been increasing markedly in recent years. Some benefits and drawbacks will be considered in this essay.

Literally one centennial ago, life expectancy was about 50-60 years in the majority of lands. However, in a small period of time, human's life became longer for one third, for instance, in a very advanced countries people live about 70-80 years, meanwhile, in less developed once, the number is quite smaller. If the quantity of elderly is increased, accordingly, life conditions contribute to longevity, and this affects to a whol...

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