The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. what do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?
Thanks to improved living standards and universal accessibility of medical facilities great majority of people have life expectancy to seventy or eighty. As we all are well aware, longevity is a positive sign in societies. But what exactly happens when the number of elderly people in the world increases. Let’s take a look at both sides of this issue.
On one hand, over the past two decade medical science has tried to find out ways to increase the life span of persons. There is no doubt that, longevity is measure of livability in a country. In addition to longevity in between people can be owing to the improvement of technology and societies. Therefore, longevity is indication that will emphasize the social welfare schemes are bearing fruit. It should be noted that, elderly persons have other benefits for close relatives and communities. They are more experienced and knowledgeable than before. Hereupon, these can be applied for guidance of younger generation.
On the other hand, society with elderly people is needful to more investment due to special cares and various diseases such as stroke, heart disease, diabetes, so on and so forth which are widespread in between aged population. Almost all of aged people are not able to work, they in retirement age needs to care by their children and other close relatives, owing to financial problems and personal affairs.
From what has been discussed one can draw the conclusion that, it is felt that although longevity all around the world is a positive indication, it is not without its drawbacks. One can not aspire for a society in which elderly people outnumber younger people. The future of a nation, definitely, is in its youth.
- individuals can do nothing to change society any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions How far do you agree or disagree 86
- It is important for travellers and business people to understand the cultures they come into contact with however briefly What are the main advantages of doin so what do u think is the main disadvantage of not doing so 75
- The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind but it could be more usefully applied How far do you agree 54
- Some people believe that competitive sports both team and individual have no place in the school curriculum How far do you agree or disagree 79
- The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full time members over last year The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members 79
they in retirement age needs to care by their children and other close relatives,
they need to care by their children and other close relatives in retirement age,
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 283 350
No. of Characters: 1379 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.102 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.873 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.634 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.578 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.493 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5