New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transferred the lives of consumers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
The trend of buying and selling products through online has been increasing at a higher rate. Some argue that this pattern changes the purchasing behaviour of consumers. I strongly agree that online shopping enhances consumers’ lives.
To begin with, new technologies such as online shopping make consumers to access to all the products around the world without visiting the store physically. For example, people live in a developing country can buy a product from a store which is in a developed country by only connecting to internet. Thus, it enhances peoples’ way of living by letting them to experience all types of products around the world.
Furthermore, online shopping helps to save time and cost of the consumers. Online shopping is available for 24 hours, and consumers can buy the product at any time they want. Moreover, nowadays sellers offer more discount on online shopping to promote it, which helps consumers to buy the products at a lower cost than visiting the shops. Therefore, without having time restrictions and extra discounts make consumers to move towards to online shopping.
In addition to above, another reason which encourages consumers to go behind online shopping is, it provides description of the products which is not available in the traditional way of shopping. Description allows customers to compare the products with other brands and make the decision wisely. For instance, when people are trying to buy a new brand, the provided details of the products helps them to make the decision easily and they can check other buyers’ reviews as well. Hence, description helps them to understand the product.
To conclude, I agree that online shopping has transferred the lives of consumers in a positive way by letting them to access to wide range of products as well as saving their time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... has transferred the lives of consumers in a positive way by letting them to access to wide range...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79724749487 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508305647841 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5345534244 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136507721618 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526245224024 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338499141857 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921384610678 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378931517377 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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