there are many criminals who commit crime because it's in their nature, they have grown up in a society that allows or think that certain crimes that are committed are to show off their strength or teach the other a lesson. However, there are many who commit a crime under certain pressure or to defend themselves. hence such criminals should be given a chance to prove their worth.
Most of the countries allow paroles to criminals, that allows them to step out of prison and do something good for themselves. These are chosen based on their attitude and their behaviour inside the cell. prisoners who demonstrate good behaviour, if they are given a chance to help their society, then they would accept it with both hands as they are situational criminals. Imagine a teacher is punished for a theft, there would be a reason he/she must have done that, but if the same person is asked to teach other prisoners while serving his/her sentence then it is beneficial to both the parties. You have more people who get educated and at the sametime the time is served.
The idea of letting criminals out can also backfire in case of hardcore criminals or with people who have the habbit of decieving others. hence the officials need to be very careful in letting out the criminals.
- Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- You live in a room in college with you share with another student. However,, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college. In the latter,-describe the situatio 70
- Nowadays, environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or individual country. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rtain pressure or to defend themselves. hence such criminals should be given a chance...
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...de and their behaviour inside the cell. prisoners who demonstrate good behaviour, if they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39685167651 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6971403104 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172530610849 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653687332291 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520054161705 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113633034795 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159603223548 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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