These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about tourism and if it has developed significantly in the last decade in less developed countries. While it is possible to claim that tourism generates foreign currency, my view is that disadvantages outweigh advantages. In this essay, I shall explain both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why tourism is considered to be disadvantageous to less developed countries. One of them is that the development process a country needs to undergo. After analysing an article published on tourism, I understand that the cost of development goes out of taxpayers money. Because tourism helps to generate foreign currency, local authorities do not tend to interfere even if there are significant impacts to society. Despite the fact of providing support to people with better relocation plans, the government may acquire lands and people may need to move out; however, they will be compensated. For an example, if a family is asked to move out due to a town planning proposal, it may be devastating news for them as they will have to relocate to somewhere where they do not want.
Those who argue for tourism has developed significantly have a different view and say that it actually can be a good thing. Firstly, it claimed that tourism creates more jobs. Then, there are concerns about the security of local businesses.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that the development of tourism in less developed countries brought disadvantages. I would strongly recommend that the government should intervene and be more considerate about people before planning to promote tourism. Let's think positively, and pray for the government to do the right thing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14236111111 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91694567118 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9914720226 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346732095397 0.242375264174 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118342060276 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130719731565 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226269192758 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954107265323 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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