These days, it is an irrefutable fact that people debate about the law and the vast majority believe that it controls human behaviour. While there is a history of law that runs hundreds of years of past, some people deter to consider law changes people. However, in this essay, I shall analyse both positive and negative impacts of abiding by the law and rational conclusion is presented at a later stage.
At the outlay, there are several reasons why many people prefer to abide by the law and one of them is to live peacefully and make people disciplined. As the initial penalty for breaking the law, verbal warnings are introduced, it is then followed by a written warning and a fine. Depends on the cause of breaking the law, people may face jail time, a life sentence or death penalty in some countries. With respect to an academic article published at Harvard University in regards to law, it is revealed that enforcing the law helps people towards refuge.
Nevertheless, there are some people consider law is an obstruction for a peaceful lifestyle. Moreover, it is argued that harsh punishments such as life sentences, death penalty are cruel and it violates human rights and yet, authorities tend to enforce the law to civilise the society.
While there are strong arguments to support both sides of the case, my opinion is that to enforce law helps to discipline people and I strongly believe law shapes up human behaviour tremendously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...article published at Harvard University in regards to law, it is revealed that enforcing the ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nforce the law to civilise the society. While there are strong arguments to supp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64894497287 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5751533111 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180531306873 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796402832797 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357366785891 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121800935081 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268339778543 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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