Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
It is considered by many individuals that keeping animals in a zoo is unethical and immoral while others support this practice because this helps to protect endangered species. In my opinion, zoos are a reliable and safe place for protecting wild animals.
On the one hand, many people claim that a zoo is a prison for wild animals where they live like a domestic animal. They are restricted to a limited area and entirely dependent on human beings for foods which are absolutely against their natural lifestyle. While in a jungle, they have a freedom to wander in a huge forest and hunt their prey by themselves which make them healthy and agile. For example, it is observed that wild animals in a zoo are lethargic and lose most of their crucial life skills because of the unnatural habitat.
On the other hand, those who support to keep animals in a zoo believe that it is a secure place for numerous endangered species. Due to deforestation and poaching, several wild species are in threat and are struggling for their existence. But, a zoo is a place where animals are safe from predators and also provides a suitable environment for their breeding. For instance, in China, there was a time when Panda became an endangered animal, but, now, their number has risen significantly due to successful breeding programs of Panda in zoos. Thus, it is clear that animals are safe in zoos.
In conclusion, although a zoo does not provide similar natural habitat like a forest, however, it is apparent to me that a zoo is a reliable alternative for wild animal protection. Hence, it should not be shut down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...lifestyle. While in a jungle, they have a freedom to wander in a huge forest and hunt the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6628822339 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8818303796 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177966013852 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764597162147 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724170608042 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132174153776 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612702824417 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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