Topic: Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that these days, fossil fuels are a major source of energy in a large proportion of nations in the world. Some countries, however, have started to replace them by renewable energy which is a good action for their nations' development.
Firstly, alternative energy usage is considered as an useful measure to help us gradually reduce our dependence on natural fuel, which already causes unintended consequences for human health and the environment. It is no denying that fossil fuel is one of the core reasons leading to a wide range of environmental problems. Unless we consume less of the Earth's natural resources, it is impossible to fight climate change and safeguard our future. For examples, according to researchers, not only constructing wind farms and solar energy sites in Africa slows down the warming process of the Earth but also has a certain positive impact on those dry places.
Secondly, as fossil fuel is non-renewable, these energy sources can not guarantee the survival of human beings in a long term. With the current extreme exploitation, the valuable natural resources would be used up, leaving us no other choices than seeking for additional energy source such as hydroelectricity. This is a safe solution to the loss of fossil fuel and ensures the future development of the human race.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there a many benefits for government to introduce the use of alternative energy instead of natural ones which lead to problems about the environment, thereby threatening our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
It is true that these day, fossil fuels are a major source of ene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94413043189 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7497305381 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312615892611 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115294401406 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545019959447 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181970453556 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290550060946 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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