Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents' fault; others say that schools are to blame.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that mothers and fathers are to be blamed for their offsprings' worsened attitudes; however, others feel that the teachers and school authorities are responsible for this. As well as offering my opinion, this essay will discuss both viewpoints and give reasons why the learning institution should be blamed.
To begin with, lack of adequate training on the part of parents is why children's attitudes are getting worse. Hustling to provide for the needs of the family has made them ignore the most important job, which is to teach them the right and wrong way to behave. But this has been dismissed by a recent research carried out by Wilford Elementary school, where it was discovered that students portray good character when they get home but behave otherwise in the academic environment.
On the other hand, lack of punishment for wrong doings is the main cause of this bad behaviours. Many private and public school teachers have been warned not to lay hands or punish any pupil for any offence. Instead, such child ought to be reported to the immediate authority who would only caution the student. To illustrate this, a newly elected state governor of a state recently passed a law that no toddler or teenager should be admonished for any reason.this new rule has led to many children behaving rudely which was not like that some years ago.
In conclusion, while some believe that parents are the reason children behave more badly, others thinks schools are the cause of this unacceptable traits. however, in my opinion, the learning environment are to blame because they no longer scold their pupils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97090909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52399787822 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3161078833 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208540327125 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765036996679 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614232853745 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139983503432 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783648933023 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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