TPO 46
The reading claims that there efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic databases rather than paper. However, the lecture disagrees with it.
Firstly, the reading claims that this way can reduce the costs. However, the lecture disagrees with this idea. This is not a good way for saving the costs, because the doctors still need to save those paper for the back up. If they lost the data, they still have something to look at it. So they also need to pay those bill for storing those paper.
Secondly, the reading claims that they think it is a way to prevent errors. Some doctors have the poor hand writting which is hard to identify. However, the lecture disagrees with this idea, because the doctors will still use the paper to take notes. The people who put the data in the computer are staffs. Also the staffs won't be 100% sure about the hand writting, they might accidently put the errors on the data.
Thirdly, the reading claims that it is a good way aid research. However, the lecture disagrees about it. Nowadays the American government have been sit a law called private law. So the patients have their own right to block their treatment. It is hard for the doctors to access to those patients things. They also need those permission from patients, which is quite complex.
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- TPO 46 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ut the data in the computer are staffs. Also the staffs wont be 100% sure about the ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reading claims that it is a good way aid research. However, the lecture disagrees...
^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sat'.
Suggestion: sat
...adays the American government have been sit a law called private law. So the patien...
^^^
Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this permission' or 'those permissions'?
Suggestion: this permission; those permissions
...o those patients things. They also need those permission from patients, which is quite complex. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 227.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73127753304 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16522400619 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.181629592 49.2860985944 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6111111111 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1800317042 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593244178701 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044745521589 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128877740244 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339208316309 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.3589403974 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 53.8541721854 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.0289183223 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.