International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?
these days, family members seem to spend less time eating with each other. In my view, there are many reasons behind this phenomenon, and many drawbacks have resulted from this trend.
Personally, the disappearance of together eating within a family can be attributed to two main reasons. First, due to the advance of technology and media, children are tempted to appealing tv programs or the internet, so they are impatient to sit in the desk and have meals with their families. Consequently, many indulgent parents might allow them to eat in front of tv or computer so that they can be entertained simultaneously. In addition to this, there is a remarkable increase in single-parent households who are too occupied with their work or social relationships. Therefore, those parents do not have enough time to prepare home-cooked meals and enjoy them with their offspring.
Unfortunately, two major negative outcomes can be anticipated from this trend. In terms of family connection, spending mealtime together is a stable routine, which is a fundamental factor for a close-knit family. During the meals, parents could educate their children about moral lessons, or family members would be able to share their stories and experiences, enabling them to bond their relationships. With regard to health, when children are permitted to eat alone, they might choose to eat junk food from fast food chains, which are usually children’s favorite dishes. In fact, these foods contain a large amount of chemical substances and cholesterol, which lead to many health problems for kids such as obesity or hyperactivity. By having meals together, people could ensure their families to have well-balanced diets from nutritious home-made food.
In conclusion, I am convinced that people no longer enjoy meals with their family owing to the parents’ hectic schedule and students’ interest in tv or internet, and this trend can resulted in many serious effects on the family
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
these days, family members seem to spend less...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32802547771 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0110702884 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4669677906 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0204714050782 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00786362458311 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0125278955118 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0106747630337 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107578247885 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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