individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that the environment is getting polluted every day. It is important to take certain measures to protect our planet. I strongly believe that government and huge organizations can play a major role for the betterment of the ecosystem, rather than people trying to make an impact individually.
Firstly, it is difficult for a person to contribute to the nature every single day. This is because, all of our time takes up in the office, colleges, schools and so on. We tend to take rest after work, instead of volunteering for the environment. To illustrate, I always prefer to walk short distances lot less than riding a bike that emits chemical oxides. I tried to encourage my fellow beings to do the same but they did not take it seriously and I had to let them go.
On the other hand, there is a saying "unity makes strength". When all the people willing to ameliorate the global system, set up an organization dedicated to it, proper planning can be done without any inconsistency. For example, my friend works in an NGO which is mainly focused to spread awareness in society about negative effects of plastic usage. Furthermore, they also distribute jute, paper and cloth bags for free. As a result, consumption of plastic has been reduced in several communities . In addition, government composed waste segregation system which is a separation of wet and dry waste, so that it can be decomposed and recycled respectively.
Personally I feel that, in enormous organisations, people coordinating with each other can bring fruitful results when compared to Walking Alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'distances'' or 'distance's'?
Suggestion: distances'; distance's
...lustrate, I always prefer to walk short distances lot less than riding a bike that emits ...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... has been reduced in several communities . In addition, government composed waste ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, for example, i feel, in addition, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01417077598 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9267142083 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115572415376 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299382889543 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033197871482 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643859994283 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108271870947 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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