Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, environmental issues is a major topic among the public. Whether individuals have the capability to improve the environment has become a controversial issue. In my view, everyone can do something to protect the world we are living just by doing little things in daily life.
Firstly, though individuals do not hold many resources and technologies as governments and corporations do, their small behavior will eventually have an influence on a big picture. For example, it only takes a few minutes for a citizen to do the proper waste process, segregating different materials, but by doing so, they are saving considerable time for the government to process the waste after having collect them. So, there’s no effort too small for the protection of the environment.
Moreover, the plans and strategies of governments and big corporations will be affected by individuals’ choices. For instance, if consumers say no to plastic bags, those companies who manufacture such product will have to seek a substitution to satisfy the buyers, which is most likely to be recyclable fabric bags. If consumers have raised their awareness of preserving our planet, governments and companies will definitely follow their steps and swift to provide more environmentally friendly services and products.
However, that is not to say that governments and corporations do not have their role to play in terms of the environmental protection. Just as what mentioned above, they have more resources and methods to deal with environmental problems at macro level, such as carbon emission and rising sea level, by signing conventions such as Kyoto Protocol to set up a standard for the gas emission.
In summary, every individual can participate in all kinds of activities which aim to protect the environment, no matter it is an important move such as buying a electric car or a small choice, such as refusing to use a plastic bag. Meanwhile, governments and companies have their jobs to do, putting more efforts to develop technologies in order to deal with severe damages already exist. Only by doing so can we save this beautiful planet for our next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sues is a major topic among the public. Whether individuals have the capability to impr...
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Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... it is an important move such as buying a electric car or a small choice, such as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2435530086 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13330300235 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587392550143 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3383214927 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256758100051 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920426730338 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503889074422 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149324131117 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533478324843 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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