If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Maybe the most desired invention is a time machine among the scientists. People always dreams about going back in time, even if today this kind of travel is not possible. But in Turkey every person who calls himself a Turk would want to meet with Atatürk. He was the father of the Turks and he was role model for countries that all the world who suffers from imperialism. If i had a chance to travel back in time and meet someone, Atatürk would be one and only choice of mine.
Mustafa Kemal studied on a military school. Even he was a young person, his friends and teacher saw a bright future ahead of him. Mustafa was one of the smartest students of his era. After he graduated from turkish military academy, immediately start to fight with enemies who wants to see collapse of Ottoman Empire. After enormous achievements from the battlefields, he became commander of all turkish military units. Despite of lack of armors, weapons and soldiers, under his command whole nation united and save their own country.
After Mustafa Kemal’s tremendous victory in first world war, he became a hero for the Turks. He could be easily gain a high place from the empire. Most people could choose this option without blink of an eye. But his personality can let them to choose easy way to make money or gain place. course he didn’t choose the easy way and after field war he starts a new fight for bringing democracy to his nation. After some time and after suffering for his democracy fight with the ottoman emperor he won the combat, ends the ottoman empire and became first president of Turkey Republic.
Atatürk was a visionary. He knew that empires has to collapse before nationalism. After he became President he make a lot of reforms do the nation, help them to become a person, not a slave as used to be. Mustafa Kemal brought election, found political party, changed ottoman alphabet to latin alphabet and give order to Quran's translate to turkish language. Mustafa Kemal was an example for the entire world about human right because he was the first leader to give enfranchisement of women. Atatürk developed his country almost in every place like agricultural, industrial and economical.
Atatürk was a symbol against imperialism, and symbol for revolution fo the entire world. As a turkish citizen i am very proud with him. Most in other countries have streets that named Atatürk or effigy of him. Even thought most of his life spend on fields of war, his “ peace at home, peace in the world” motto known nearly everyone in this world who related with Turkish history. For all this reasons and for thousand of more, i would like to see him in person to show him gratitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80425531915 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48625374271 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7499831058 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6428571429 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.39285714286 5.45110844103 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123603277315 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356808728607 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462320619028 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774831748438 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582264395125 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.