If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I would like to meet Mahatma Gandhi if I would have chance to time travel back in past. Gandhiji was a freedom fighter and led India to freedom by their non-violence movements. He is the father of nation of India. There are many person I would like to meet but I choose Gandhiji for several reasons.
Firstly, at the time he started his movements in India there were many freedom fighters and leaders but emerged as a one of the great leaders. So if I meet him I would like to ask him how he
conveyed his ideas to that many people effectively. How he managed that much people who followed him? How people understood his idea of non-violence? As I want to become a leader in my field, these are the questions which is important to me. I think he is the person who can teach me how to become a leader.
Secondly, protesting was only thought as a violent movements, but he gave the idea of non-violence to the world, you can protest anything in non-violent way. Violence is not the answer of anything, this idea conveyed by Gandhiji very succesfully. I am very much fascinated by Gandhiji's ideas of non-violence. That's why I would like to ask him personally that how he got this ideas and what was the motivation behind it to think and do such a things.
In sum up, I can say that I am fascinated by his thoughts and his kind and gentle personality, plus his great leadership skills. So, I want to meet Gandhiji.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42366412214 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68377069408 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515267175573 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9388900075 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4375 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157304870825 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581718272989 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807915837392 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924649801202 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726649869621 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.