The bar chart gives information about the amount of time spending on telephone calls in three sorts of terms between 1995 and 2000.
Overall, the percentage of local-fixed line fluctuated slightly and accounted for the largest proportion of the whole period . In the period, the figure for national and international-fixed line and mobiles went up.
In the 1995-2002 period, the rate of local- fixed line remained steadily until 2002, at over 70% and it peaked at 90% in the year 1999. People in the UK used national and international- fixed line increased gradually, from below 40% to over 60%. By contrast, the rate of using mobiles plunged about 30%.
Using local-fixed line always remained highest of total number of minutes of telephone calls over 70% from 1995 to 2002. Although the percentage of calling by mobiles went up rapidly, it still accounted for the smallest rate over the period and its highest point was at approximately 37% throughout 2002.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3355704698 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85773025708 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8923712689 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136295051849 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619532963644 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646584505125 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912358532583 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613157461716 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.