Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
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Respected Panchayath Secretary,
My name is Sujith,a resident of confident auriga of edathala area.Am writing this letter to inform you about the condition of our pathways due to deposition of waste and other unwanted things.it has accumulated in such a way that it become a serious threat to the health and well-being of people residing in these area.
First of all it became a hurdle for people walking across the street especially those who prefer a morning routine to walk across for a healthy outfit.it not only block there pathway but also the kind of rotten smell emanates from these waste and garbage became a serious threat to our health as we have no other ways but to respire the polluted air.it not only toxic to air but also polluting the water flowing through the canals. As you now many people in our area depends on corporation water through this channels.Lastly i afraid these dirty conditions may be a cause to any serious epidemic such as malaria
having said we had seen people living in nearby areas facing a real problem of deposing the waste and garbage day-to-day because of the failure of government functionaries. The authorities are neglecting these areas and hence garbage collection has not become a daily affair.
we strongly condemns these lack of coördination of the government authorities and hence required an immediate interference from your side to tackle the situation under control.
yours faithfully
Sujith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Panchayath Secretary, My name is Sujith,a resident of confiden...
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Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ry, My name is Sujith,a resident of confident auriga of edathal...
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Suggestion: Am
...nt of confident auriga of edathala area.Am writing this letter to inform you about...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: Am I
...nt of confident auriga of edathala area.Am writing this letter to inform you about...
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Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...it has accumulated in such a way that it become a serious threat to the health an...
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...ecome a serious threat to the health and well-being of people residing in these a...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'these areas'?
Suggestion: this area; these areas
...h and well-being of people residing in these area. First of all it be...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...being of people residing in these area. First of all it became a hurdle for peop...
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...ea depends on corporation water through this channels.Lastly i afraid these dirty co...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...corporation water through this channels.Lastly i afraid these dirty conditions may be ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...o any serious epidemic such as malaria having said we had seen people living in...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...llection has not become a daily affair. we strongly condemns these lack of coörd...
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Suggestion: We
...become a daily affair. we strongly condemns these lack of coördin...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'condemn'
Suggestion: condemn
...ly affair. we strongly condemns these lack of coördination of the gover...
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Suggestion: Yours
...tackle the situation under control. yours faithfully Sujith
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tion under control. yours faithfully Sujith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, lastly, may, so, well, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75679715532 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.516665756 44.8134815571 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.666666667 76.5299724578 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 16.8248392259 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 4.34317383033 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902980923418 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497288788398 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184027383757 0.0603063233224 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391593096242 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243290246011 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 8.37731958763 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 70.7449484536 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 7.45979381443 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.