Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.
What the problems would be
What are the main causes
Your suggestions
Dear sir/ Madam,
greetings for the day.
I am writing to let you know that i am not at all satisfied with the cleaning facility provided by you as most of the workers remain absent. it seems that they are quite sure that no disciplinary action will be taken against them.
let me explain my situation in more detail. The trouble started 2 months back ,prior to that everything was fine. However, from the past few days there has been a drastic change in the quality of service and most of the workers are not doing their work effectively. The scattered workers can be seen everywhere in our locality and its alarming for all of us as it can spread respiratory diseases among the residents. Moreover, the piling up of garbage is not only creating health related issues but it is also hampering the traffic flow.
Could you please appoint some new workers who are passionate for their work. At the same time i am hoping for an strict action for negligence.
please let me know if you need any further information.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Kushal Rana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ Madam, greetings for the day. I am writing...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... sir/ Madam, greetings for the day. I am writing to let you know that i am n...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I am writing to let you know that i am not at all satisfied with the cleani...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...u as most of the workers remain absent. it seems that they are quite sure that no ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...y action will be taken against them. let me explain my situation in more detail....
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etail. The trouble started 2 months back ,prior to that everything was fine. Howev...
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Line 10, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ionate for their work. At the same time i am hoping for an strict action for negl...
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Line 10, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... work. At the same time i am hoping for an strict action for negligence. plea...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...r an strict action for negligence. please let me know if you need any further inf...
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Line 13, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow if you need any further information. I am looking forward to hear from you. ...
^^^
Line 14, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...er information. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Kushal ...
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Line 17, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you. Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72680412371 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49534054045 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1957960833 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0259719194857 0.216113520407 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0102101789323 0.0766984524023 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204725775209 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00632901241496 0.12726935374 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00914192304569 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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