Climate change is the major factor of the global phenomena that deserves an immediate attention. If I would be given an opportunity to study climate change, then I would choose the over melting of the ice in The Northern Himalayas. Because, some experts have identified a life threat on the long run.
Firstly, the ice is getting melted due to the extreme heat released from The Sun. Our planet is being protected by the ozone layer, which saves from radiation and other harmful UV rays that is produced from The Sun. This ozone layer is being damaged by our own mankind directly or indirectly. Many man-made machines are very responsible for such catastrophic cause. The ozone layer will be completely damaged , if this situation is not being controlled. Last year, the temperature in the summer was 38 degree Celsius, but this year it has reached to 42 degree Celsius. Hence, this is proved that the ice is being reduced due to the overheat.
Secondly, The Government need to take security measures to save the people, who are living in the northern part of The Himalayas. It has been observed that the people are forced to migrate themselves to other safer destinations to save their families. In the month of January, there has been a huge avalanche in the northern area, due to which 73 people have died in that accident. Therefore, government might need to work on this situation, so that such accidents may not happen in the future.
To summarize, though the climate change in The Northern Himalayas is due to the over melting of the ice, the main cause behind it is our own mankind. However, Government need to follow some strict security measures to get this situation to be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75496688742 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56750448778 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0230997152 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104773081517 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032032977421 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546415389749 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755410240981 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666698742699 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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