agree or disagree
people learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students than from higher level such as teacher and supervisors.
According the my point of view I agree on that the fellow students or co-workers learn things better those at their own level than by high level such as teachers. To hold this opinion I have some points to explain.Let see one by one.
The first reason is that ,the fellowship students have to work under their professor which give them only the guidline about their work.They not provide the solution how to do that thing. For example if the professor told to the co-worker to make any report of the project then that fellow students must have to know the word pad function to make the report but if not . Then student must have learn it by own because professor does not have much time to explain how to used the worpad to make the report. So the student learn it by own knowledge and level.It give a benefit to students how to learn a new thing without any help of professor.
The second reason is that,fellow student means you have do all the work which is give by your professor wheather you know how do it or not? For example a project needs documentation which keep the track of the project steps. Doing documentation of unkonw project is not so simple thing. To prepare documentation you have understand the project first by your own effort. Then you have list all them in wordpad format and Finally organise it properly. Once to do first time you feel it difficult. But in second time you are good in that work . why? Because you used your own silk to develope it and understand it.
The last reason is that, fellow students get chance to learn how to increase thier confidence and the presentation silk by presenating the seminar and work report to the professor by using thier own ways. Stduents understand more whenever then do that thier own level and own ways. Finally I said that student get more knowledge when they try their own self than teching by their teachres. Just try it you can get good experience.
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Sentence: The first reason is that ,the fellowship students have to work under their professor which give them only the guidline about their work.They not provide the solution how to do that thing.
Description: The fragment which give them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: Then student must have learn it by own because professor does not have much time to explain how to used the worpad to make the report.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and learn
Sentence: So the student learn it by own knowledge and level.It give a benefit to students how to learn a new thing without any help of professor.
Description: The fragment student learn it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace learn with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment It give a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: The second reason is that,fellow student means you have do all the work which is give by your professor wheather you know how do it or not?
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb 'to do', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to have and do
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and give
Sentence: To prepare documentation you have understand the project first by your own effort.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and understand
Sentence: Then you have list all them in wordpad format and Finally organise it properly.
Description: The fragment list all them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace all with verb, past tense
Sentence: Finally I said that student get more knowledge when they try their own self than teching by their teachres.
Description: The fragment student get more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: The first reason is that ,the fellowship students have to work under their professor which give them only the guidline about their work.They not provide the solution how to do that thing.
Error: guidline Suggestion: guideline
Sentence: The second reason is that,fellow student means you have do all the work which is give by your professor wheather you know how do it or not?
Error: wheather Suggestion: whether
Sentence: For example a project needs documentation which keep the track of the project steps.
No spelling errors
Sentence: Doing documentation of unkonw project is not so simple thing.
Error: unkonw Suggestion: unknown
Sentence: Because you used your own silk to develope it and understand it.
Error: develope Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The last reason is that, fellow students get chance to learn how to increase thier confidence and the presentation silk by presenating the seminar and work report to the professor by using thier own ways.
Error: presenating Suggestion: presenting
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Stduents understand more whenever then do that thier own level and own ways.
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally I said that student get more knowledge when they try their own self than teching by their teachres.
Error: teching Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: teachres Suggestion: teaches
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No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1545 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.389 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.289 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.341 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.224 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5