Environment protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extend do you agree or disagree
It is true that these days environment preservation play such an important role in society. Many people think that ít is responsible for government instead of each person. While this view is still a source of controversy, I agree that saving environment is both authorities and individuals responsibility.
On the one hand, I think that person should do some things to protect the environment. Firstly, individuals should not litter and put waste things into right places that help to keep environment always clean and, obviously, it has a good effect on life’s conditions. Furthermore, people should boycott unsuitable products in terms of harmful for environment. For example, nylon bags are extremely dangerous product since it will take a long time to disintegrate. In addition, discharging these things into river or sea is the cause of series dyed of many kinds of animals living in there.
On the other hand, we cannot deny that the main responsibility of environment protection belongs to government. There are many reasons to explain this view. The first reason is that tackling issues of society especially saving environment are the most priority to improve the standard of people’s living. This means that almost activities for environment protection depend heavily on payment from government such as constructing wastewater treatment plants, garbage processing plant. Moreover, by imposing laws in terms of environment protecting, government will have good tools to control this situation. For instance, several years ago, authority does not much concern about environment. resulting in pollution of canals and rivers and even people who live this near area infected a lot of.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that saving environment is not only responsibility of government but also individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Resulting
...oes not much concern about environment. resulting in pollution of canals and rivers and e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... live this near area infected a lot of. In conclusion, I strongly believe that s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49645390071 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13406173208 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4568399607 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150281684787 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453400941848 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470636847954 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927455414912 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233548867451 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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