Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
in what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make?
has this become a positive or negative development?
it is true that the methods of communication and interaction between people have changed, thanks to advanced technology, particularly the internet. this has led to the emergence of a new kind of friendships. Despite some negatives of this development, it is, by and large, a positive one.
With regard to the changes in relationships made through the internet, the prominent one is that people can now contact remote people. In contrast, people in the past resorted to their classmates, fellow workers, relatives and neighbours to make friendships. However, they now enjoy the ability to make relationships with others who are thousands of miles away from them. Undoubtedly, the internet is the responsible mediator for this significant change as people now enjoy a wide range of social websites and applications such as Facebook, Twitter, Whatsapp, Line, to name but a few.
The question of whether this is a positive or negative development is quite tricky because communication via the world wide Web has both advantages and disadvantages. one drawback is the absence of face-to-face communication which is vital in terms of developing social skills with the added benefit of the possibility it provides to enhance physical activity such as walking while talking. On the other hand, to me, online communication has more merits than downsides. Firstly, it has opened the door for communicators to keep in touch with others of various backgrounds, cultures and languages, the matter that results in a deeper understanding and tolerance between nations. In addition, thanks to online interaction, people can now expand their circles of friends, broaden their knowledge of the world, learn new non-native languages and enjoy free communication from the comfort of their home.
In conclusion, unprecedentedly advanced technology has facilitated the development of a new type of relationships which is the ability to make remote friends. Finally, I would like to reiterate that these relations are generally more advantageous than traditional ones as they offer a better knowledge of the world and enhance the sense of tolerance and equality between different nations, all being made conveniently, cheaply and with ease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, by and large, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45086705202 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2595211199 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8214184196 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235515513067 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799565088424 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426509478924 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138519026636 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391137032764 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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