Nowadays, it’s true that the recently appeared media are playing vital roles into people’s daily life. There are several reasons why this is the case and I think the disadvantages of them basically outweigh the merits.
There are various reasons why the newly born media are becoming predominant in our modern world. One of the major factors is that the sustainable development of technology and telecommunication, reducing sharply the cost of the spread of information. At the same time, the thriving arising of internet have been reshaping the measurements how people get access to the news, domestically and internationally. Instagram, for example, successfully attracting people by encouraging people to express their opinions and interact with others through posting personalized photos, upgrades the communication in a more entertaining way. Furthermore, an increasing number of academic achievements are post on internet, which could benefit more and more people from higher level of education with cheaper price and more convenience.
However, we should hold our grounds firmly while adapting ourselves to those fierce changes, as some of them probably not affect us in positive ways. Firstly, social media making all the information easily accessible, however, a wide range of voices and concepts could give us wrong impression about something important. There for, without our own independent judgement, there’s no doubt that people can be easily manipulated by the medias. Facebook is the largest social media company, which has been involved into the scandal of deliberately affecting people’s preference in last American President selection campaign. Lastly, if we get used to using phones while reading, we would not concentrate completely on the book due to the disturbing news shown on the phone screen.
In conclusion, although new means of media are extremely important for every member of society, we need to be alert about the disadvantages imposed on changing our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58957654723 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11461635232 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671009771987 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6671841701 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117287698373 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377219488963 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345330281633 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701069556629 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188337919079 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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