According to the editor, there is an increasing , amolst doubled time complained by the commuters, rush-hour traffic on Blue highway between the urban and suburban area . Once there was a choice of widening the highway with and extra lane of traffic, while the last year's fact of Green way nearby makes the editor deny this opinion and turn to bicycles. So the editor suggests that the an additional bicycle lane would relieve the pressure of the Blue highway on rush-hour will be better. I dout this suggestion because there are still some questions we need to reexamine carefully.
First of all, there is no obvious relevance proved by the editor between the two highways. As the editor doesn't offer us the conditions of the two high ways ,we can not make the conclusion that the measure failed in the Green High way cannot be applied to the Blue High way. There is a possibility that an the two hight way may be different with the traffic. For example, the Green High way's traffic jam was caused by the loosing management of the local police, so the traffic worsen by an addional lane where more drivers felt like to drive on.While under the rigid rule by the Blue High way , it would do with another lane.
Secondly, the complains by the commuters are not on behalf of all drivers who drive on thr Blue High way. Complained by the commuters the fact that their time on the road to the center of city doubled,the editor doesn't show us why they spent more time when driving. And without the number of complaints , we still couldn't make the conclusion about the traffic condition of the Blue Hight way. Maybe there were only a few complants and the traffic condition was actually good in rush-hours.
Thirdly, the editor's suggetion that building an additional way for people riding bicycle is unfounded with no evidence of necessity. The editor does mention the local people like riding bicycles , he still , however does not tell us wheher these people is riding as hobby or as an essential traffic method. So we should not let people who ride bikes for fun to go to work with biclycle because they may not like to.
In conclusion, I suggest the editor shoule make a comprehensive survey of the tow highways and make further suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng to the editor, there is an increasing , amolst doubled time complained by the c...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hway between the urban and suburban area . Once there was a choice of widening th...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...d extra lane of traffic, while the last years fact of Green way nearby makes the edit...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...o bicycles. So the editor suggests that the an additional bicycle lane would relieve t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to reexamine carefully. First of all, there is no obvious relevance proved by ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...between the two highways. As the editor doesnt offer us the conditions of the two high...
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Suggestion: ,
...r us the conditions of the two high ways ,we can not make the conclusion that the ...
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Suggestion: a
...e High way. There is a possibility that an the two hight way may be different with...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: an; the
...e High way. There is a possibility that an the two hight way may be different with the...
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Suggestion: While
...here more drivers felt like to drive on.While under the rigid rule by the Blue High w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nder the rigid rule by the Blue High way , it would do with another lane. Secon...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...n the road to the center of city doubled,the editor doesnt show us why they spent mo...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...o the center of city doubled,the editor doesnt show us why they spent more time when d...
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Suggestion: ,
...ng. And without the number of complaints , we still couldnt make the conclusion ab...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...out the number of complaints , we still couldnt make the conclusion about the traffic c...
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Suggestion:
...ding an additional way for people riding bicycle is unfounded with no evidence of...
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Suggestion: ,
...on the local people like riding bicycles , he still , however does not tell us whe...
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Suggestion: ,
...l people like riding bicycles , he still , however does not tell us wheher these p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72519083969 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45328973752 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506361323155 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4648724845 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205475414743 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075993560731 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769616338095 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117505836061 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802905903792 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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