A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
A general opinion among the adults now is that nowadays people are judged based on their material possession and status rather than their trust, kindness and honor. The former is given more importance than the latter. While I agree that people are judged based on their social status and possession – I think an individual’s value is also given importance. \
You don’t need to look deep to figure out if this is true. Look at the people we consider as successes in the world now; Tech billionaires, social media influencers, activists, sports stars and models. All of these people are popular because they are exceptional in their field but the reason we can admire them is because they have made a successfully made a name for themselves. We measure this success by their net worth and who they are friends with. Their social circle and their lifestyle is what we are all envious of.
But is that all we care about? No.
Look at Bill Gates. He has been on the list of the top 5 richest person in the world for the last 10 years. Yet the reason that most people admire him is not because of his humbleness. He is a down-to-earth man who is investing in Africa to eradicate polio and provide everyone access to clean water. The fact that he stepped down as CEO of Microsoft and decided he wanted to make the world better rather than make more money is the reason he is an inspiration to all of us.
In conclusion, even though the public judges a person based on their wealth – their worth is determined by their humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...field but the reason we can admire them is because they have made a successfully made a na...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...s been on the list of the top 5 richest person in the world for the last 10 years. Yet...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60507246377 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55551302519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9840790462 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137112720369 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046301969857 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433449106744 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719189093953 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426135323208 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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