Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples
Climate change is an undisputedly environmental dilemma which we strive to find an answer. There are many factors attributed to this issue and burning heavy metals is one of these elements. some people believe that we should replace unreservedly fossil fuels by renewable energy resources while others claim that it will lead to a slump in economy. From my perspective, we should not utterly stop using fossil fuels but it needs to have some solutions to environmental concerns.
To begin with, it is undeniable that underground-formed fuels as gas, coal, oil play a pivotal role in lots of predominantly profitable industries. Interest coming from these industries outweighs its disadvantages and as a result, ecosystem, environment, biodiversity and habitat have been sacrificed on the altar of profit. if it had not been for these sacrifices, many nations will face economic quandaries which lead to an inferior life standard. For instance, Kenya is a developing country where the atmosphere is fresh with the disappearance of industrial disposal, which means smokestack industry is not prioritized but they are in another predicament named famine depriving the lives of millions every year due to poverty. However, at the same time, our planet is poised at the brink of a severe environment">environmental crisis and current environmental problems require urgent attention.
it is high time for human to take actions to combat the environment-related problems caused by heavy industries. it is recommended that people try renewable energy as wind and solar power in houses and relevant places. The government should launch campaigns which encourage fellow citizens to use sustainable energy and once these campaigns are completed and underway, the more environmental issues will be solved. As being the future of the world, children need teaching about natural values and importance of ecosystem Moreover, entrepreneurs ought to invest more in waste releasing systems in order to ensure that their factories’ disposal will be as harmless as possible.
To sum up, I believe that we should balance between the economic benefits and environment as we have only and exact same house named the Earth. if human can join hands together, our planet will be a better place where all species could co-exist in happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41369863014 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43434246988 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621917808219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9302588136 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.733333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207185762563 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657741016592 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647084208425 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116767677454 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820142468404 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.