Write a letter of application for one job advertisement.
Dear sir,
I am writing to express my interest for the vacancy of Teaching Assistant in your Teaching Centre.
You will see from my curriculum vitae, I studied French at Lam Son gifted high school from 2014 to 2017. Then, I studied Faculty of International Business at Foreign Trade University in September 2017. However, since August 2018, I have majored in Faculty of English Language Teacher Education as well as a member of External Affairs of its student association. Besides, I started studying Korean as the third language at this semester.
I was employed as a teaching assistant for nearly 100 students at Ocean Edu from August to November in 2017. Starting from December 2017 to March 2018, I held the position of consultant and sold about 30 English courses at the same workplace. Afterwards, I worked as a receptionist at InterContinental Hanoi Landmark72 till June 2018. In October at the same year, I was one of the organizers of English Olympiad Contest in Vietnam.
I have currently been an English tutor for at least 20 students since October 2018. I am responsible for ensuring the quality of teaching so that they can get high score at English.
The role of teaching assistant is really appealing to me. And I believe that my good education and work experiences make me a highly competitive candidate for this position. My key strengths that would support my success include good office IT skills and ability to work under high pressure. I also have experience in working with a customer focus with communication skills and pedagogic skills. Finally, I am willing to promote the security and well-being of children.
I can be reached anytime via email at halulili1999@gmail.com or by mobile phone 0818 180 567.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Yours faithfully,
Mai Viet Ha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, look, really, so, then, third, well, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 937.175257732 169% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04458598726 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04383302258 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 127.690721649 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 290.88556701 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2801731349 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731628974173 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233251621258 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337962401982 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0336755513768 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379199135688 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.