In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Obesity has become annoying problem in our mean time. There is more than one member in each family who have gained weight rapidly specially children, which should be considered a serious decease. Many reasons are causing this problem and their solutions are available, which will be discussed in the following lines.
Although young people are considered the healthier sector of society, there are the ones who suffer the most of obesity. This results from several reasons such as wrong eating habits and lack of body exercise. Our modern life routine is affected by technology which makes us lazy. For example, an article which was published in New York Times shows that, 50% of teenagers in North America who are suffering from excess weight are depending in technology for performing their daily life activities such like, ordering fast food through the web and spending their free times in playing video games while sitting at home. Thus, these bad habits should be replace into daily exercises by teaching young people to prepare their own meals and spend spare time in gymnastic activities in order to put out weight and increase body flexibility.
Another important reason of putting on weight for all family members is office working hours. This kind of work does not help the body to consume the fat. For this reason, working procedure should be changed by adding some physical activities to the schedule. For example, a recent study published by Alexandria University tells that, 20% of the fat employees in the university administration building had stopped to gain weight by changing one habit which is using the stairs instead of the personnel lift.
To conclude, street food should be ignored and technology must not be used instead of human muscles at home for the reason of maintaining our health and fitness. Body exercise will be much help for fat people, if it becomes a life habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean 'replaced'?
Suggestion: replaced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01577287066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44882744672 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.457092134 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118947096431 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423872613195 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369275576146 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770307678872 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250488484567 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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