do you agree or disagree with the statement? parent are the best teacher for their children
parents are important teachers for their children. they know their child better that every body does and could make a valuable effects in education of child. however, personally I think that parents are not the best teacher. but some people may feel different. in the way I feel, I have provided two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First, parents want to keep their children safe and far away of any possible danger, in fact they worry about their child and it would cause some disadvantages for their education. such as, when I was in the fourth grade, ous school organized a trip to north of iran to show us different kind of species and the forests and their essential effects on the environment of iran , which we had not seen before due to this fact that our city was established in a dry climate. although our teachers guaranteed that the trip was going to be totally safe and they would take care of us, my parent were so stressful and worried and even they did not want to allow me to take part in the journey, considering this fact that they knew this trip was so important for me because it provided me a valuable chance to improve my acknowledge about the things that I had never experienced. so it was a little challenging for me to go to that trip. according to my experience I feel like parents are not the best teacher for child.
Second, parent may force their child to continue the major that they are working on it or are interested in. for example if your parents are interested in one major of sports, like football, they would probably expect you to become a football player too, or if hey are scientists, they will have more willing for their children to become a scientist and some times they do not care about the major that they children are interested in. for example my parents are doctors. from the age of the four, they had plan for me to become a doctor just like them. in fact they were sure about that I am gonna be doctor and when their friends asked them about what I am interested in or capable of, they answer that I will study medical in the university in future. they never asked me did I actually want to become just like them or not. but the trust was I really waned to become an environmental scientist and I felt like this is the major that I can do my best and become an effective person for my county and world. Nevertheless, reaching to my goals were so difficult for me due to this fact tha my parents were upset about my decision and they never supported me at all. even they tried their best to convince me that I was making a mistake and I should go and study medical. and as result they barely helped me at all. so parent are not the best teacher for child.
in sum, I think that parents are very good and valuable teachers. but they are not the best because their feeling for their child would cause some disadvantages for their education and in some cases, parent wants their children to continue their job or their interest as their future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, kind of, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 104.0 43.0788530466 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40357142857 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36840245073 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419642857143 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.1094446931 48.9658058833 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.217391304 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.347826087 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274724264148 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113759940053 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115221491576 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216783293483 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472605423648 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.